Tuesday, March 27, 2012

The Turning

Wading into the water at sunset
as the broadloom of the sun
unravels around your body
your fingers work the water
while you slowly turn and 
raise your hands 
showing me the moon.
Posted by at

3 comments:

  1. wordpioneerMarch 28, 2012 at 3:54 PM

    and raise your hands
    dripping with the bluelit
    mercury of the moon.

    (revision)

    ReplyDelete
  2. QeeranMarch 28, 2012 at 11:39 PM

    Ever booned to read you....and the metaphor is so genius in you.

    ReplyDelete
  3. wordpioneerMarch 29, 2012 at 3:12 PM

    Thank you, Qeeran.

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)